I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi cody its brodie here.I like they way you made a athletics day slide.you brought me back when we had to do one.Next time you could look back and try to put full stops.
Hi cody, Riley here great job on making this! you brought me back to when i did Athletics day But next time, you could fix up some of your writing i can't read the writing that good so maybe you could change the colour so your writing?? anyway that's all for day Bye Cody.
Hey cody its Kaycee here from your class I really like your athletic slide it is cool I like the background you have at the front maybe next time you could make your own one.But I really like your slide. well ill blog you later
Hi Cody. this is savanah speaking. I like your first slide. it looks cool. Mabye you can think about choosing some colours that people can see and mabye you could think about adding some of the places you came?
Hi Cody, Its Phoebe. I like your athletics background and it's cool, I like!!!! Did you know I cant see the word clearly? Maybe you could highlight the words. bye!!!!!!
Kia ora Cody Bea here, Cody you and Benaiah work really hard and this is amazing and The facts u have you used are really good. I like when the shotput one because the picture was really funny and maybe next time you could put more about Athletics. blog you later.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi its nikau.i like the background at the start of the slide its cool.Next time you could re read your sentences so it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteHi cody its brodie here.I like they way you made a athletics day slide.you brought me back when we had to do one.Next time you could look back and try to put full stops.
ReplyDeleteHi cody, Riley here
ReplyDeletegreat job on making this!
you brought me back to when i did Athletics day
But next time, you could fix up some of your writing i can't read the writing that good so maybe you could change the colour so your writing??
anyway that's all for day Bye Cody.
Hey cody its Kaycee here from your class
ReplyDeleteI really like your athletic slide it is cool I like the background you have at the front maybe next time you could make your own one.But I really like your slide.
well ill blog you later
Hi Cody. this is savanah speaking. I like your first slide. it looks cool. Mabye you can think about choosing some colours that people can see and mabye you could think about adding some of the places you came?
ReplyDeleteHi Cody, Its Phoebe. I like your athletics background and it's cool, I like!!!! Did you know I cant see the word clearly? Maybe you could highlight the words. bye!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cody Bea here,
ReplyDeleteCody you and Benaiah work really hard and this is amazing and The facts u have you used are really good. I like when the shotput one because the picture was really funny and maybe next time you could put more about Athletics.
blog you later.
hey cod its banana here
ReplyDeletei liked it when you help me on this slide
you brought me back to when we did this slide
why did you don this slide
bye