I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Cody. I love New Zealand music so I was interested to see your slide. Next time when you are writing something in your slide, you might want to write it in your own words rather than copying and pasting from somewhere else. Which of the artists that you have shared do you like the best? I saw Stan Walker at a show recently and he was amazing.
Hi cody, i love how you added little thing about the people you are talking about really cool but maybe next could you add more slide just so i know more about it! i i want to know was it fun making this or not? anyway i have to do something else bye!!
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Kia Ora Cody it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this slide
I like how you put the images of the singers.
Who is your favourite nz singer?
i like your mucic i didn't know how talneted you are but i realy like the part that youput phots insted of videos
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cody.
ReplyDeleteI love New Zealand music so I was interested to see your slide. Next time when you are writing something in your slide, you might want to write it in your own words rather than copying and pasting from somewhere else. Which of the artists that you have shared do you like the best? I saw Stan Walker at a show recently and he was amazing.
hi cody, it's me Phoebe. i'm so interested to look at your nz music month an it is awesome!and i like how you make the facts too, good bye!!!
ReplyDeleteHi cody, i love how you added little thing about the people you are talking about really cool but maybe next could you add more slide just so i know more about it! i i want to know was it fun making this or not? anyway i have to do something else bye!!
ReplyDeleteHi Cody,
ReplyDeleteI'm really proud because you know all the New Zealand Music Month and good job:)
Hi Do You Know My Favourite Singer Is Stan Walker. By The Way You Should Make A Slide About Your Favourite Singers. By The Way It's Hakeem.
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